Sunday, April 20, 2014

Writing: Starting With the Mystery Element


This old tin box was one of the elements that inspired my current WIP.  When I first saw it at a yard sale, I didn’t know who the characters in the story would be or where the story would be set or even what time period, but I immediately was inspired to use the box and its contents as a clue. Why? Because just looking at it made me want to know more—like what was inside it and why had it been kept for so long? It really had very little value and was only moderately attractive.

I did know the deceased elderly woman who had owned the box. The woman's family had been moderately well off and she'd been quite attractive as a teen.  Also years ago the woman had told me that she’d been sent to finishing school in a larger nearby community. There she'd had a hot romance that ended in a turbulent and very brief marriage to a wealthy man.  After that she’d always lived alone in her family home.

I opened the box at the yard sale, then instantly bought it for two bucks and took it home.


Inside was a collection of valueless mementoes--but they all were neatly dated and labeled.  For a while I thought about organizing them by date, and then writing a midcentury historical romance based on them. Instead they became the backstory for my current WIP—a contemporary mystery where a teenage girl is trying to unravel a secret from her family’s past.

My main character spotted the closed box several chapters ago.  In the next scene, she finally gets to open it and look inside.  It’s been a lot of fun thinking about how napkins, soap bars and sugar packets can become vital clues. Also, knowing I was going to use these clues even before I had a plot or characters, challenged me as a writer.  But for me, the challenge is part of the fun.  




How about you? Do you know what the vital clues are before you start writing a story?  And how about your closets, do you have mementoes tucked away—things which someday may inspire stories?

Wednesday, April 16, 2014

Reading this Weekend in Burlington





This Saturday I’m going to be reading from my novel MOONHILL as part of the Vermont SF Writer’s Series: Cold Mountain Stories—A Night of the Fantastic! It’s at Quarterstaff Games of Burlington. For more information check out Geek Mountain State's website. It should be a blast. If you have a chance to stop by, please make sure you introduce yourself to me. I love meeting my online friends in person.


Wednesday, April 9, 2014

Review: THE BODY IN THE WOODS by April Henry. Don’t miss this one!

I just finished reading an ARC of the young adult thriller THE BODY IN THE WOODS by April Henry--and it was amazing.

It’s about three teenagers from very different backgrounds who have recently volunteered for the Portland County Sheriff’s Search and Rescue. When they’re called to help search for a missing autistic man, they discover the body of a teenage girl instead. From there the story takes off at an exciting pace and never lets up until it reaches a climax that takes them from an eclectic group of teenage outsiders to friends with an understanding of each other’s quirks and needs.

One of the most wonderful things about THE BODY IN THE WOODS is that it isn’t created out of thin air. It’s based on a real-life search and rescue team that includes teenagers. The realistic SAR details in the book show the time the author put into research. At the same time, the details never get in the way of the action. Actually, that realism is what drew me in and made me so enthralled by this story. But it wasn’t just the SAR details. All aspects of this novel are expertly researched and crafted—from details about bird watching to others involving mental illness, homelessness and electronic gadgets.

This wonderful realism also made each of the novels four points of view unique and equally interesting. Nick is a swaggering teen with a fear of being not good enough, and a very real reason behind his struggles. Alexis is fighting against poverty and to hide her mother’s mental illness. Ruby’s brilliant, but her day-to-day ability to function ‘normally’ and to fly under her parents’ radar is a never-ending battle. The antagonist is also marvelous in a demented way, especially when his focus turn toward the three teens. Even the antagonist’s victims are fully realized people with backstories and their own difficulties.

I enjoyed THE BODY IN THE WOODS very much and highly recommend it. However, I do think it will probably be most appreciated by teens rather than adults—which is as it should be. It’s especially good for younger teens that like hiking, the woods and action packed novels. I strongly recommend it to teachers and librarians. Buy this one for sure.

To give you a hint how much I liked it—when I hit page 50, I stopped reading and took the time to order a different book by the same author.

BODY IN THE WOODS is the first book in the POINT LAST SEEN series and will be released on June 14th.

To read more about THE BODY IN THE WOODS and other novels by author April Henry, check out her website here.  




Tuesday, March 11, 2014

Writing: Inspired by Eating Style



Just as I sat down at the computer to dream up a post on what inspires me, the TV in the other room blared: inspired by food.  Yeah, okay, I can take a message even when the universe delivers via the boob tube.


But as I started to think about how food inspires me, I realized it’s not only what people eat, but how.  Everyone has a style that reveals or hides his or her personality and backstory.  We change our style of eating with situations, who we are with and where.  Eating is so visible and unavoidable it makes hiding innate quirks almost impossible, even the act of trying to hide or eat in an accustomed style reveals discomfort . . .  Read the rest at my sister blog   Five Curiosities