In the past, I’ve worked from very basics outlines
created by writing the story’s turning points on index cards, pinning them to a
bulletin board, then filling in with more index cards as I drafted and ideas came to me. I never worried about how long drafting took me, but it
was never fast. However, now that I have deadlines set by a publisher, it seemed
like time to try creating and using a more detailed outline, to speed
drafting and reduce revision time.
After bitching about outlining for a few days and
whining about how I didn’t know what to do, I realized the only way was to
simply quit wasting time and plunge in.
First, I printed off the two page synopsis I’d created
for my agent and editor. Then I got out WRITING THE BREAKOUT NOVEL WORKBOOK by
Donald Maass. In the appendix of the workbook, Maass has a technique for
creating an outline by answering questions. It didn’t create a detailed outline
like I wanted. But, by combining Maass questions with my synopsis, I ended up
with a solid skeleton, some nifty new scene snippets and my brain was jolted
into action.
Next, I reminded myself that no one was going to see
this outline and I started playing. Scene by scene, I added flesh to the
skeleton. I moved details when I found places they fit better. I combined
settings to strengthen the pace. I added wild and weird ideas that might or
might not work, and even snippets of dialogue and mini-scenes that came to me.
Most importantly, I kept reminding myself to have fun—that the outline was just
for me.
(The back section of this notebook is a hardcopy of my new detailed outline)
At the same time, I tried something else new. To me, building a story isn’t just about
words, goals, conflict and disasters. It’s also about visualizing. So I created
secret Pinterest boards and collected images and music to accessorize the
outline. One board is for a specific character
I needed to know more about. It’s devoted to all aspects of her: her appearance,
her soul, what she would wear and eat, her magic, how she evolves through the
story, her moods and even the camper-van she lives in at the beginning of the
story. Pretty much any detail that reminds me of her and her actions in the
story went on a board. Another board is for a new setting and another for a
main plot thread. My favorite board simply has surreal images, since this story
is paranormal. Looking for pins helped
me detail existing ideas, inspired new ones and even gave me a few story twists
as well. Best of all, since I’m not going to start drafting this manuscript until
December, these boards will make it easy for me to quickly bring even the
tiniest details back to mind. (My public boards for book one are Here ).
It took me a little over a week to finish the written
outline and collect the images. Then I went back and cut a few ideas that I
knew wouldn’t work and did the same with the images. The outline I ended up
with reminds me of a rhinoceros. It’s a bulky 28 pages (just under 18,000-words).
It’s messy with wrinkles and bumps. It charges forward at a reckless pace. It is
not a pretty delicate thing, but I’m thrilled with it. And I’m 100% sure this
will make writing a first draft much quicker and cleaner.
(View of mountains near my house)
Sometimes that is just what we need to do. Jump in and start, anywhere and any way you can. Remember to come up for a breath of fresh air and a beautiful view. :)
ReplyDeleteYou're so right. Yup, the last photo is part of my surfacing :)
Delete"Charging forward with a reckless pace." An active outline. How excellent!!! Eugene O'Neill began all his plays with an outline and just filled it in, filled it in, filled it in until the play was done. The only trouble with this for me would be that I allow the end to shift and maybe change entirely depending on what has happened earlier. My outlines (if I've made myself make one) are flexible, especially toward the end. Sort of like jungle gyms built out of flexible tubing.
ReplyDeleteInteresting. The end of my stories are often the first thing I know and the one thing that doesn't change. Just proves there's no right way to do it :)
DeleteFor the first time I'm working with a loose outline only, as in combining the planner in me with the pantster I didn't know I had. The thought of an eighteen-thousand word outline makes me take my virtual hat off to you, Pat.
ReplyDeleteCool and good luck drafting! Yeah, I can imagine letting go of control is as difficult as taking hold of it. I really do think different stories and situations calls for fresh techniques.
DeleteI love the Pinterest idea! I too am trying to work off an outline. I am such a panster though, that my "outline" is usually just the first draft.
ReplyDeleteI think your idea of outline = first draft isn't that far from what I've done this time, just more meat on the bones. The Pinterest idea is one of the best things I've tried in ages. I'm also using a secret board for promotion ideas. It's so nice to have a visual way to remember things--and music too!
DeleteI loved reading this! Using pinterest is such a great idea. The idea of writing a book is such a HUGE idea to me - even it turns out to be a memoir. I really liked reading through your process. And thanks for visiting me during Follow Fest!
ReplyDeleteGreat to meet you as well! Memoirs probably feel even larger than some other stories at the start. You know so much and have to figure out what not to use.
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