tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6134941707367928575.post3304963883032779922..comments2023-11-03T01:35:47.312-07:00Comments on Pat Esden--Mythmaker: Revision Tip: lengthening and deepening a manuscript. And snippet from my WIP Trish Esdenhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02049667128434033805noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6134941707367928575.post-83353209981508279532015-06-01T14:18:29.788-07:002015-06-01T14:18:29.788-07:00Great example of 'show don't tell.' I ...Great example of 'show don't tell.' I do the same thing--start off sparse and then plump up with details/description later.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6134941707367928575.post-11853336681869940102015-05-21T15:44:26.885-07:002015-05-21T15:44:26.885-07:00Thank you for stopping by and you're so right....Thank you for stopping by and you're so right. Actually, that's part of what got me thinking about genre and using it when looking for places to deepen and lengthen. Trish Esdenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02049667128434033805noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6134941707367928575.post-70439157713955423392015-05-21T15:21:32.088-07:002015-05-21T15:21:32.088-07:00Nice, Pat. Adding description can be a death-nail,...Nice, Pat. Adding description can be a death-nail, but you showed how to do it right.Mirka Breenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00653086859905415156noreply@blogger.com